This is wonderful in every aspect! Your characters are so true not only to the versions we've seen on the show but also to how real people react to epic life changes. Kurt, here, is spectacular in this way. He isn't going to just over night forget his past and be bright&shiney. He's not instantly going to know how to love someone back. You take us through his growth with insight and gentle irony (it feels almost like Austen at times)
Also in that vein, you do an amazing job writing really important moments and cloaking them in the feel of everydayness. You let us see how giant this love story is, even as it's played out on a very small stage. I really do mean this--this a brilliantly crafted narrative that fills in what we undoubtly won't get to see on tv. But it's ok now since we have this!!
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Date: 2010-11-27 05:36 pm (UTC)Also in that vein, you do an amazing job writing really important moments and cloaking them in the feel of everydayness. You let us see how giant this love story is, even as it's played out on a very small stage. I really do mean this--this a brilliantly crafted narrative that fills in what we undoubtly won't get to see on tv. But it's ok now since we have this!!